Valcartier, you’ve been sold a bill of goods, either that or you are one of those useful idiots that have been and are so useful to our enemies for so long. It’s time you read something other than the defeatist “if it bleeds it leads” crap spewed by the popular media, I suggest this would be a good start. http://www.nato.int/ISAF/Update/media_features.htm
Surely as university students your first prof explained that quotes out of context are useless as proof.
Let’s see how Prof Reccesoldier scores your paper.
We are writing this letter to offer you a dissenting point-of-view about your deployment that we hope will prompt you to reconsider your participation.
I won’t delve into the legal ramifications of inciting mutiny but I’m sure other will.
The Afghan people have never attacked Canada or Québec, and had nothing to do with the attacks of September 11,
While factually correct everyone knows that facts without context are worse than useless. The Taliban not only aided and abetted Osama and his clag, they celebrated right along side of him when thousands of innocent civilians were murdered. You know Osama, the guy that said this…Minus 10
The 9/11 Attacks Were "An Unparalleled And Magnificent Feat Of Valor, Unmatched By Any In Humankind. On the blessed Tuesday 11 September 2001 … they launched their attacks with their planes in an unparalleled and magnificent feat of valor, unmatched by any in humankind before them. … Yet with the destruction of the Twin Towers in New York, there occurred an even bigger destruction: that of the great American Dream and legend of Democracy." (Translation Of Purported Bin Laden Audio Message, Posted On Islamist Site, 2/14/03)
2001. Still, Defence Minister Gordon O’Connor -- who used to work as a lobbyist for corporations and public relations firms who profit from war – recently stated that your presence in Afghanistan is “retribution” for 9-11.
Name me one war that was not a retribution for something… For unforgivable naiveté (come on you’re university students! How about a little critical thinking! Shame on you, lazy, lazy, lazy) you loose 5 points.
The Canadian government defends its involvement in Afghanistan in the name of women’s liberation. However, the Afghani government that you are defending is comprised of warlords who are just as brutal in their treatment of women as the former Taliban regime. In the words of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA):
Finally a hint of truth, however it is vastly offset by the fact that although treatment of women in Afghanistan today does not meet Canadian standards it is far, far better than when this was the norm: http://www.pejmanesque.com/archives/Taliban.jpg or this http://www.nyu.edu/classes/keefer/joe/farsha2.jpg I’ll only take off another 5 points for sloppy research.
Your deployment in Afghanistan means complicity with the civilian deaths and other activities – like the transfer of prisoners to potential torture and death – that are tantamount to war crimes; here are some examples:
So you are Lawyers now? I won’t address the US action that you state at first but I will take you up on what you obviously see as ‘Canadian atrocities’.
- in March 2006, soldiers shot dead a taxi driver riding near a patrol [CBC News, March 15, 2006];
This didn’t occur on St Catherine’s street. Misrepresentation and willful ignorance of your subject matter loose you 10 points.
The man, identified as Nasrat Ghali and believed to be in his mid-40s, was driving a three-wheeled motorized taxi known locally as a rickshaw. Canadian troops fired warning shots at him after he drove through an Afghan police checkpoint, coming within less than one metre from the Canadian vehicle, said Lt.-Col. Derek Basinger, chief of staff for Task Force Afghanistan.
http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2006/03/15/afghanistan_taxi060315.html
- in August 2006, a 10 year-old boy was shot and killed [National Post, August 23, 2006];
Your juvenile pedantic distortions of factual events loose you another 10%
The 10-year-old, whose name has not been released, was the passenger on a motorcycle that military officials say crossed a security perimeter that was set up around the bombing site.
Officials said soldiers were fearful of another suicide attack and fired on the motorcycle after several warnings to stop.
"ISAF (International Security Assistance Force) soldiers signalled the motorbike to stop and fired two warning shots," NATO said in a statement.
http://www.canada.com/nationalpost/story.html?id=2792d7a4-39d1-4901-943e-added0ff883c
- in December 2006, an elderly Afghan man was shot and killed [CTV News, December 13, 2006];
More of the same -10
A statement from NATO's International Security Assistance Force says the loss of life was regrettable and it was unclear why the motorcyclist refused to heed the warning.
"It is not known why the motorcyclist failed to stop when clear signals were given, and a full and thorough investigation has commenced," says the statement from the ISAF.
The Canadian military has said it believes the soldier who fired the shot followed all the reasonable rules of engagement,
http://www.ctv.ca/servlet/ArticleNews/story/CTVNews/20061213/afghan_civilian_061213/
- in February 2007, there were two separate incidents involving the killing of Afghan civilians by Canadian troops, including a homeless beggar [Canadian Press, February 17, 2007, CBC News, February 17, 2007 and CTV News, February 19, 2007].
The first one wasn’t Canadians. Minus 10 marks for sloppy and lazy research.
Separately, unidentified alliance troops opened fire and killed a second man who ran in between vehicles of a parked convoy in the pre-dawn hours, near Kandahar Airfield.
The early-morning incident did not involve Canadians and military officials declined to say what nationality they might be.
http://cnews.canoe.ca/CNEWS/War_Terror/2007/02/17/3640893-cp.html
The second one was. And you loose another 10 points due to a willful distortion of actual events.
Canadian troops in southern Afghanistan killed an unarmed man Saturday as he walked toward their convoy chanting and wearing what appeared to be explosives around his torso, a military spokesman said.
http://www.cbc.ca/world/story/2007/02/17/afghan-shooting.html
The second half of your diatribe is less factually and reality based than is the first half. You did not even bother to correct the simplest of errors, like dates (Canada’s commitment to the mission was signaled by PM Cretien on Oct 7 2001). Your manifesto is so riddled with inaccuracy that only the truly dim, and those as willfully ignorant of the facts as you yourself have proven to be will ever be drawn in by this juvenile twaddle.
Really, you people put your name to this piece of tripe? I’d be freaking embarrassed to have my name associated with such a piss-poor product. Are you failing out of university? Please, if you are, do not consider freelance journalism as a career choice. Oh my god! You’re not in a journalism program now are you? Your poor parents all that money washed down the drain.
How did you get accepted into university with writing skills like that anyway? Were they having an off day or do they have a quota of tinfoil-hat wearing, tree hugging, granola munching, appeasement minded, surrender monkey’s that they have to let in each year.
By the way you score on this piece of electronic butt wipe was 30% before I grew so disgusted with the quality of your argument and research. If I had to mark the second half I believe that you would receive a negative percentile. But since that would be mean, I’ll bell curve this paper against what is passed off as news on the Afghan mission and you get a .5% final mark.
Have a nice day and don’t let the door hit you on the ass on the way out.