As this is a thread on people joining the CF to become officers, and as it is also one of the site guidelines to show some professionalism in one's communications skills (ie. spelling, grammar, CAPITALIZATION, sentence structure, etc.); one would expect someone who has aspirations of becoming an officer to at the very least attempt to start improving their written communication skills on application to join the CF.
As for your email, perhaps you should try that link on a DWAN computer, and not one on the internet at home.
You may also try going to the
Treasury Board of Canada site and printing off the
TBS/SCT 330-60E form, and then find the
TBS/SCT 330-23e. These should have been in the package that your received from the CFRC so that you can research and fill them in prior to returning them to the CFRC. At the CFRC, they will be able to verify that you have filled them in properly. Then they may submit them electronically (on the intranet),. They WILL have you sign the hardcopies that must be submitted.
There are also many topics on this site that cover this question.