I would recommend this group as they claim to champion clear English, if you want to be nitpicky about English usage:
http://www.plainenglishawards.com/
I'd submit one thing farther - she doesn't even know what MOC she is applying for. The closest thing to a Med Aid I ever have been was a Cas Aide back in the mid 80's before I rolled over. We were Med A's - ie Medical Assistants - up unitl about 2 or 3 years ago when we became Medical Technicians. Perhaps if you can't even get the trade name right...
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